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The same old charrie

Post by Jasmino123 on Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:41 am

Real name: Luke Ross
Alias: Eagle
Alignment: hero
Age: 22
Gender: male
Race: human (kinda...)
Place of origin: Texas, USA
Physical Description: He has spiky brown hair with natural blonde highlights, tanned skin and brown eyes with golden flecks. He often wears jeans and a black t-shirt with 3/4 length sleeves which he wears a charcoal black long coat over. He wears red all-stars without any socks on and the laces aren't tied just stuffed into the shoe. He keeps his wings hidden in his coat. His height is 6' 7" and he has an ordinary build
Costume Description:He wears a mask that's mainly yellow but has white eye shapes around his own eyes. He also wears a yellow top and trousers, with slits in the top so he can fit his wings through them. He wears a red belt that he keeps the knives he uses to fight with in.
History:Luke was born in Texas on the 15th of September. He lived there with his parents and younger sister Angela until he was 18 when he moved to New York to study bio-chemical engineering. At aged 20 he was talent spotted and got a job working for the government on enhancements for soldiers using attributes from animals. He was so sure of the design he made that he tested it on himself aiming to give himself enhanced vision and to get the project into production. However he got more than he bargained for gaining his wings and losing his ability to see in colour and instead being able to see thermal images. He destroyed the machine and all the plans and fled, scared of what others would think of him and of what they might do to him if they found out. He also knew that looking back at the plans they were flawed and if anyone tied to recreate the experiment the same thing would happen. At age 21 he was keeping as low a profile as possible, hiding his wings and trying to live a normal life whilst figuring out a way to reverse the changes. He first used his new powers when he was in town and a little girl walked out into the road. He flew over and out her back on the sidewalk before she was hit by a car, then left before anyone could see his face. The next day in the newspapers he was called the 'eagle' and so his alter ego's name came about. After several other circumstantial events he decided to make a mask and costume so he couldn't be recognised. Aged 22 he still goes back and visits his family, pretending that he is still working in NY and not telling them about who he has become or what happened to him.
Personality:Luke gets easily angered and annoyed especially by people who wont leave him alone or do as he says. He doesn't really react to other peoples emotions on the outside making him look cold but inside he often feels sympathy but is scared of hurting people who become close to him because he's unsure about the extent of his abilities so he tries to push them away. He will often get into fights if he thinks the other person deserves it but will never fight someone weaker than him who isn't looking for a fight or trying to hurt someone else. He's generally sarcastic and this can annoy lots of people as he never seems to come up with a serious answer. He hates rules and generally gets annoyed by people who think they can enforce any kind of rule on him. He also often gets annoyed when people don't understand what he's talking about as information he views as 'basic' is more advanced and he expects people to be able to think at the same level as him without him having to explain everything to them.
Powers:Luke has eagle wings which are to scale with his body and he can fly using these. He also has enhanced hearing and can use thermal vision. He uses these to help him find hidden villains and people in danger. His eagle wings mean that he can fly at very fast speeds
RP Example: (Only needed on the first form.)
Luke looked at the notes in front of him and sighed as he ran a hand through his hair. Every day it seemed more and more impossible to him that he'd ever find a cure. He scrumpled up one of the notes and chucked it in the waste paper basket and it bounced back onto the floor as there was no space for another note. "I thought of this, why can't I reverse it just as easily" he sighed and looked in the mirror, he could just about see the wings in the dimly lit room. He knew they were brown but only because of the descriptions of himself was read in the newspapers as it'd been a long time since he'd seen in colour. He turned his attention back to the scribbled words and muttered "none of this would've happened if you hadn't got it wrong in the first place"

He wrote down an idea then crossed it out, replacing it with another one "just can't think..." He said to himself before getting up and walking into his kitchen. The apartment he lived in was tiny and it consisted of three rooms; the kitchen, the 'bathroom' and his bed/living room. He turned the kettle on and took the jar of coffe out the draw as he waited for it to boil. An idea came to his mind but he dismissed it "I've already thought of that a million times, it's not even theoretically sound". He picked up a mug and got the milk out of the fridge as the kettle began to boil. The switch on it flicked off and he put some coffee in the cup before pouring hot water then milk over it. He took a sip of the hot drink and spat it out into the sink "forgot the sugar!" He said to himself and put some in before stirring the dink and returning to his desk

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Re: The same old charrie

Post by Black Ink on Wed Apr 24, 2013 11:16 am

Add some more description to his costume? Things like fabric and the like.

Please change the name from Luke Ross. That is a Disney character from JESSIE. I checked Eagle and couldn't find much but what I did find sounds a lot like this. I'll let it slide because there was no copyright evidence.

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Re: The same old charrie

Post by Jasmino123 on Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:55 pm

.... WTH is Jessie? XD

Sorry but I have used that name on several other sites

You gonna ban John smith as well because it's used in Doctor who?

Goddamit I've never even heard of the program

Luke keeps his name. It's a part of him. Trust me on this, ask zach. Luke's name doesn't change and of course the story's similar how else does someone get wings like an eagle?

With pritstick and too muh spare time? I don't think so.

Sorry it just seems ridiculous, I can understand the name if there was a character exactly the same but Luke is a grouchy idiot with a sarcastic sense of humour and Wikipedia says that in the tv series he's 'a prankster' which sounds to me a lot more sociable.

Further more if you want a hair colour comparison, look at David Tennants hair, it's more like that than the character

Also the Disney one is adopted and has three adopted sisters, Luke is not adopted and has a birth sister... There's a difference.

(Oh btw it's a TV series and I don't get sky so I can't watch Disney. FGS it's just stupid. Copying a whole character is bad but just having the same name? That's like saying you can't call someone 'Jasmine' because of the Disney film 'Aladdin')

I'm sorry but I could give you a link to every site Luke is on and no one else has had a problem with it. There IS no problem. I'm slightly annoyed that you'd think I'd even copy a NAME

Ross is a surname

Luke is a name

Put them together you get a full name

Doesn't mean immediately that thier stollen

As I said I'd get 'Sherlock Holmes' which is a made up name for the most part and 'Harry potter' as the name for a guy who can use magic, but there are people in real life called that name from before the books (I know one)

A names a name and if you're gonna enforce that sorry but ill just stay on chat thank you.

Stupid rule, stupid thing and if I get banned for this I don't care because its ludicrous. I could find you any character name somewhere. Honestly every name is unoriginal unless you spam a keyboard and say their name is:

Hekgdwhisj the kasha of pshahqi

You see what I mean? That name sucks

Names are names. Luke Ross is a very dear character to me and I can't change him, he's become a but precious as you can see.

There was no stealing intended and the characters are nothing alike so I fail to see what te problem is.

Sorry I just...

Can't see why

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Re: The same old charrie

Post by Black Ink on Wed Apr 24, 2013 3:25 pm

No. I told you before. No. All you really have to do is change a part of the name if you want the character to have relatively the same name.

Luke Rosser
Luca Ross (Luke could be a nickname then if you really want it)
Luka Rosser

But my decision as admin and founder is final. No to the name. Copyright, no matter how "stupid" you think it is, is actually quite serious. The site has no disclaimer as we are not a fan site at all so no copyrighted material.

I'm sorry. But I am not bending the rules for one person.

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Re: The same old charrie

Post by Jasmino123 on Wed Apr 24, 2013 3:28 pm

Look Shan I take it all back ok?

I'm tired and I'm mentally attached to Luke

I'll look at it when I have a brain XD

Pwease downt kwill mwe? :3

(And I just looked his name on there is actually Lucas XD)

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Re: The same old charrie

Post by Black Ink on Wed Apr 24, 2013 3:49 pm

OK. You can have Luke Ross (just put in the notes he is not called by any other name and is not to be confused with Lucas "Luke" Ross from the Disney Channel show JESSIE.

But go back and read the guidelines. You're missing something important.

You need more description for costume.

I suggest you don't argue with staff. Not in that manner, anyway, as if it is seen in the future, you'll be given your first offence. You have a warning.

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Re: The same old charrie

Post by Jasmino123 on Sat Apr 27, 2013 10:21 pm

Shan look at the post time

101 reasons why not to post at 5am XD

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